I liked it...
But i didn't expect you to go where you were going in the beginning. The beginning was the best of all of it. It was sort of African meets Asia styling and i thought you would do something on that sort of front, and then when it went to the basic dance tune i thought "oh...".
But then I heard some of it pop back in the background while the foreground was the dance tune. I thought that was well done but I totally expected a bit more (especially since I was way off track of what the tune was gonna be).
Besides that I thought it was good. There were some parts where you used a chord way too long and thought you would have used its derivatives (like Cmajor has F, and Ab while still maintaining the C note). I thought "Get on with it" it eventually did, but...
Overall it was good. I give it a 7.5 but there isn't such so an 8.
It was a good tune, I'll give you that, but as CO said (as I was reading his review, you should do more variant genres. I do like D n B so that's cool but maybe even stray far far away from Dance (even though all genres are connected in some way). Try out some classical. I mean alot of Dance music has a simple piano that, without hte synths, could be a simple classical melody line. Just sumfin (something) to think about.
8/10
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